This is dope! Fantastic atmosphere, composition, and mixing.
One nit-picky thing: I kept expecting for there to be a big climax somewhere. Everything keep feeling like a build-up to something bigger. I know that's typical in trance tracks but I still felt like I was left hanging by the time it was over. Just a personal preference thing.
Great track dude! Will be on the lookout for your finished version.
Thank you for the great feedback! I agree, I'll let you know when its done!
For your first time with FL, this is pretty solid. The composition is great and I could definitely see this being used in a game here on NG.
Your biggest setback here is the sample selection of the drums . Those default FL drums sound pretty weak. Plus, for this type of track I think you would want some video game-esqe drums since this is a video game track. The Shovel Knight soundtrack is a good example of the type of drums I'm talking about.
All in all, promising work!
Thank you very much! I totally agree, the default FL drums are... default. I just did not manage to get a satisfying chiptune beat yet. Still learning the basics. Not all synths are equally suitable for that. Am in the process of composing more songs, Pixelday is the goal. :)
PS: Thank you twice!
Got mad Boards of Canada and Burial vibes from this, man. Lovin' it.
Thanks! Those two were big influences on this track, so good ear haha
This is sick, man. The beginning riff reminded me a lot of some of Buckethead's stuff and 1:30-1:43 was the tits. I watched the video along with this, too. Very fun stuff. Keep it up, breh.
Thanks! Glad ya dig it!
Sick track!
I loved hearing this on the contest livestream. Really badass song!
Only thing that takes away from the awesomeness is the mixing. Gotta work on that, man. You gotta make the mix clear so that you can get as much sexiness out of your music as possible! :D
Regardless, I still loved this song. Favorite part is the airy pads...very tasty my friend ^_^
Keep it up!
Thanks, mate! :D And yeah, I know my mixing is pretty bad, but I still really have no idea what I'm supposed to do to make it better <_<
But eh, whatever. Thanks for listening :D
It may not be happy...
...but it sure as hell made me happy!
Sick shit man. I loooooooove the synths in it. Tasty :D
Keep it up man! (adding you as a favorite artist btw).
Thanks man and another thanks for adding me on your favs.Your music is awesome too. If you wish to collab someday , tell me man.
Let's make some epic shit
Ruben -Acid Paradox-
Soooo awesome
Definitely one of the deeper tracks I've ever listened to. I loooooooooove the glitches. It really adds feeling to the song and complements the title.
Fantastic job as usual :)
we both made top 5 HOLY SHITTTTT!!!
Pretty cool!
I check up on mjattie's page every so often and saw his news post about this song, so I had to check it out :D
I didn't really like the intro. It was a bit too strange for me, but I really like how it picked up at around 0:28. Really great beat there.
The quiet transitions into mjattie's fantastic piano parts were very smooth and helped keep the flow of the song. Great job on that. I also liked how you brought back the beat at 2:03. The piano and drums really accompanied each other.
Overall, you two did a really great job. It didn't necessarily blow me away, but I liked it! But one thing I would change...I'd let the last note ring out for a little bit more. I didn't really like how it was just cut off.
So...you guys get a 5/5 from me :)
Hey Uncle Squeezins,
So your a mjattie fan huh? ^^
Well so am i. Thanks for liking the song. Mjattie did a fantastic job on the piano, now i know for sure i asked the right person. We actually want to do another collab, maybe that one WILL blow you away.
Untill then!
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